Continued
from "The Restored Cleopatra", page
13 - Antony has ordered Rufio to Alexandria to find some way to get
Cleopatra to come to Antony - in Tarsus. Next, we see Rufio and Sosigenes
standing behind a screen that offers Cleopatra privacy during her bath.
The scene opens with:
CLEOPATRA
I
understand your position, Rufio.
Surely
you must also understand
mine.
I do not intend to join that
long
list of Queens who have
quivered
happily at being summoned
by
Lord Antony...
RUFIO
(aghast)
Surely
I didn't say "summoned" -
CLEOPATRA
(smiles)
You
said "invite". He meant "summoned"...
RUFIO
Apart
from reaffirming the alliance
of
Rome and Egypt, he has many
matters
to discuss with you -
CLEOPATRA
Then
let him come and discuss
them...
RUFIO
His
campaigns have been long and
strenuous
- all of Greece...
CLEOPATRA
That
Greek actress - surely she
was
no 'long campaign'...
RUFIO
Lord
Antony is fond of the theater...
CLEOPATRA
Half
the Queens in Asia Minor - one
strenuous
conquest after another.
Even
Herod's wife - that was in
Judea,
of course...
RUFIO
Your
intelligence, as always, is
better
than the best -
He
bows to Sosigenes. Sosigenes bows back.
CLEOPATRA
In
any case, I am the Queen of
Egypt.
I choose to remain on
Egyptian
soil.
RUFIO
Tarsus
is not the other end of
the
world, Your Majesty...
CLEOPATRA
If
it were one step from Egypt,
it
would be too far...
There
is a pause...
RUFIO
He
does not - bend easily...
CLEOPATRA
Nor
do I. I shall meet with Lord
Antony,
but only on Egyptian soil...
Rufio
sighs, and bows.
RUFIO
Thank
you for your attention,
Your
Majesty...
He turns
to go.
CLEOPATRA
(warmly)
Rufio,
old friend - your mission
here
may not be welcome, but you
are.
Always...
RUFIO
My
lady. A way must be found - a
time,
a place - to satisfy you both...
CLEOPATRA
(enigmatically)
Must
it, Rufio.?
A pause.
She leans her head back and closes her eyes.
Sosigenes leads Rufio off.
Charmian looks after the departing Rufio, then down at Cleopatra.
CHARMIAN
What
do you think, my Lady? Will
Lord
Antony come to Egypt?
CLEOPATRA
I
think it very likely...
She opens
her eyes, reaches out idly to the crystal boat, and takes a flacon of perfumed
oil from it. She rubs her shoulders and breast, gazing musinlgy at the
crystal boat...
CLEOPATRA
That
necklace. The one I had
made
of the coins struck in Caesar's
memory.
We're going on a voyage -
and
I shall want to take it with me...
She puts
the oil flacon back onto the crystal boat, stares at it for an instant,
then pushes it away. It drifts through the petals aimlessly. Cleopatra
emerges into towels held by her attendants. The bath is empty.
The crystal boat floats to the end of the bath,
where the water cascades over the sides into the secondary bath below.
It is carried over and crashes. The scene
dissolves to a promontory where a shepherd tends his sheep. He sees something
out at sea and runs toward the edge of the promontory to see better. It
is Cleopatra's barge. We see the barge entering the harbor of Tarsus, and
Cleopatra's handmaidens are throwing flower petals and gold coins to the
swimmers in the water. Townspeople of all
types - some in litters - arrive in great excitement. A deputation of local
dignitaries pushes through to the front. A swimmer climbs up, covered with
petals, his cheeks bulging with coins which he spits out into his hand.
It is a mistake. Someone jostles the hand and the coins fly in all directions,
people scrambling for them. The swimmer, undaunted, dives back into the
water. Someone examines a coin, biting into it. "Gold!" is heard, repeated
over and over again. Then the name "Cleopatra"...the crowd presses to the
very edge of the wharf to get a better look. Charmian
and Eiras draw back diaphanous curtains revealing Cleopatra in all her
splendor. At Antony's Palace, Rufio doesn't believe his eyes when he sees
Cleopatra, apparently coming to Antony after all. He shouts out "Cleopatra!"
Antony hurries in, sees the barge and bewilderingly says, "It must be!"
Then he orders Rufio to get plans underway for a banquet in Cleopatra's
honor at Antony's palace. He screams for a
barber to shave him. The scene dissolves to
the wharf of the Tarsus harbor. There, Cleopatra's barge is several feet
from the wharf, and the boarding stage has not been lowered, keeping the
separation intact. Sosigenes is on the deck of the barge, looking down
at Rufio on the wharf. Both men are being scrutinized by the crowd of people
on the wharf.
SOSIGENES
Forgive
me, noble Rufio, it is
you
who do not understand. Queen
Cleopatra,
at present below in
her
chamber, is on Egyptian
territory
- and intends to
remain
on it...
RUFIO
Most
learned Sosigenes, you must
forgive
me when I point out that
this
is Tarsus, not Alexandria...
SOSIGENES
You
are on Tarsus, noble Rufio.
I
am on Egypt...
RUFIO
(sharply)
Lord
Antony bids welcome to the
Queen
- she is to be his honored
guest
at the Palace tonight!
SOSIGENES
Her
Majesty regrets...
RUFIO
(wheedling)
Sosigenes,
I assure you, tomorrow
night
Lord Antony will come to her
Majesty
- but just for tonight...
SOSIGENES
Tonight
and tomorrow night - if
Lord
Antony desires to meet her
Majesty,
he will come to her,
to
Egypt...
RUFIO
And
if - as he undoubtedly will -
he
refuses?
SOSIGENES
In
that case, the Queen has
ordered
that we set sail at
once
for Alexandria...
RUFIO
And
if Lord Antony chooses simply
to
seize both your ship and your
Queen
- ?
Sosigenes
looks up, Rufio following his gaze to see a good number of Egyptian bowmen,
suitably deployed. Sosigenes smiles at Rufio...
SOSIGENES
Nothing
compared to your legions,
of
course - but enough for us to
set
sail when we choose.
Rufio
stares at him, despairingly...
SOSIGENES
Believe
me, her Majesty would be
sorry
to leave. Apart from the
pleasure
of greeting Lord Antony
after
so long -
(he
raises his voice
considerably)
-
we have many ships following us
carrying
gifts which the Queen of
Egypt
had hoped to present to the
good
people of Tarsus! Ships
filled
with wheat for their bread,
and
oil for their lamps - !
The dignitaries
and citizens are listening anxiously...
SOSIGENES
Surely
Lord Antony would not want
these
ships turned back - ?
The crowd
groans audibly in agreement. Rufio sighs dejectedly. Sosigenes continues...
SOSIGENES
Instead, Queen Cleopatra hopes
to
have not only Lord Antony and
his
staff - but all the Noble
Lords
and Princes of Cilicia -
as
her honored guests at a
banquet
tonight! Here - on
board
her ship - on the soil
of
Egypt, as it were...
The good
people cheer and look at Rufio. He smiles
grimly. He's been outmaneuvered, and he knows it.
RUFIO
I
shall do my best, learned friend,
to
prevail upon Lord Antony to
attend...
He raises
his hand in acknowledgment to Sosigenes...
RUFIO
And
for my part - I am indebted
to
you for this lesson in
diplomacy.
Perhaps some day
I
may return the courtesy...
SOSIGENES
Perhaps.
But not this day, noble
Rufio.
He smiles
and bows as Rufio departs. The scene dissolves to later
that night. The banquet is ready to start and the barge is alive with lights
and decoration. A luminous curtain has been raised about the entire deck,
to shield the guests from the eyes of the onlookers on the wharf.
Rufio arrives to a hillside near the harbor, dressed in his best. He looks
at the barge, then off. He scratches his head and shakes it dubiously.
He leans against a tree and waits. Egyptian Guards keep a wide lane open
through the curious spectators. Each guard carries two torches. The lane
itself is bedecked with flower petals. The gangplank is richly draped and
stretches to the wharf. Sosigenes comes out to stand on top of the gangplank.
He looks searchingly to his right - and then his left. He scratches his
chin meditatively, then goes back in. Inside, there are two groups of people
on either side of the banquet area. To one side - Cleopatra's handmaidens
and slaves, carrying enormous trays of drink and tidbits. They stare, confused
and bewildered, across the deck at the other group - the invited dignitaries
and potentates, richly attired in Eastern panoply. They huddle in clumps,
their backs to the other group. They ignore the passing trays of food and
drink. Between the two groups, Apollodorus paces somberly. Sosigenes crosses
to Charmian and Eiras.
SOSIGENES
One
more try, do you think? To
persuade
our guests to - ah -
mingle?
CHARMIAN
It's
no use. They will not
mingle
- they won't eat or
drink
until Her Majesty makes
an
appearance -
EIRAS
They're
behaving strangely. As
if
they were under instructions -
SOSIGENES
No
doubt they are. Well... I
think
you'd better go below - to
the
Queen...
Charmian
nods and she and Eiras leave. Apollodorus, in his pacing, comes abreast
of Sosigenes...
APOLLODORUS
Perhaps
if you were to propose a
toast
- the health of Lord Antony -
they
would drink to it...
SOSIGENES
I
have. Individually, and in
groups.
They bow politely - and
watch
me drink. The health of
Lord
Antony is ruining my own!
I
may not last the night...
APOLLODORUS
Then
there's nothing left to do
but
-
SOSIGENES
(nods)
Exactly.
I shall let you know...
He
moves on toward the look-out perch of the barge, and mounts the steps leading
up to it. As Sosigenes comes up, the lookout points to a distant light
flashing toward the barge.
SOSIGENES
Is
he still there?
LOOKOUT
Yes,
my Lord. That light flashing
on
the hill is one of our signal
men...
(the
lookout indicates)
And
there, on the wharf...is Lord
Antony's
spy...
Down below,
well apart form the crowd on the wharf, is a food vendor with a lighted
brazier. He uses a pan over the brazier to signal. Rufio, still looking
down on the barge from his waiting place, sighs and turns away, crossing
to Antony - huddled in a litter - his head poked out between the curtains.
ANTONY
Not
yet?
RUFIO
Not
yet. It seems pretty clear
who's
waiting for you to arrive...
ANTONY
I
am not going to appear before
she
does, if I have to sit here
all
night!
He pulls
back inside the curtains, angrily. Rufio goes back to his vigil. As Sosigenes
comes down from the look-out perch, he calls out...
SOSIGENES
(loudly)
Apollodorus
- !
Apollodorus,
standing by the potentates, turns...
SOSIGENES
You
may announce Her Majesty...!
APOLLODORUS
Yes,
my Lord.
He crosses
to a place of vantage from which he can address the gathering. Sosigenes
gestures to the musicians. They stop playing. The potentates exchange glances
of relief and pleasure. A few of them glance across toward the girls -
who also react in happy expectation...
APOLLODORUS
(sonorously)
Her
Most Gracious Majesty,
Cleopatra
- Queen of the Two
Lands
of Egypt!
Sosigenes
signals the musicians and the music flares. The potentates and maidens,
thoroughly mingled, flock toward the companionway. From the wharf, the
food vendor removes the cover from his brazier and fans the flames to their
highest. From the hillside, Rufio reacts with equal excitement and runs
to Antony's litter.
RUFIO
(shouting)
The
Queen has just made her
appearance
- !
Antony
sticks his head out and smiles smugly.
ANTONY
Another
lesson for you, Rufio,
about
women. They're too curious
to
play the waiting game.
He signals
to Rufio and his honor guard and litter take off. Back on the barge, Apollodorus
makes his way through the eager guests crowding up to the companionway
doors. Apollodorus throws open the doors and bows. So do the potentates.
Eiras appears, thoroughly overcome by her reception. The potentates first
have a look of consternation, then resentment. Apollodorus, beside himself
with embarrassment...
APOLLODORUS
A
thousand pardons, Gracious Lords - !
A
terrible mistake - I was informed,
that
is, under the impression - oh,
how
could such a thing happen?
Sosigenes
smiles smugly. From the shore, a great flourish of Roman
tubii is heard. The potentates turn in reaction.
Rufio and the honor guard ride in, followed
by Antony and his litter. The curtains to the gangplank are pulled back
so that all may see him arrive. The crowd cheers. Antony takes his own
sweet time, now that he is assured the Queen waits for him. He descends
from his litter, salutes the crowd in a regal manner, then with princely
bearing and stately step, starts up the gangplank to be met by Cleopatra
- he thinks. All the potentates are still at the companionway, at the opposite
end of the barge from the gangplank. They rush to welcome Antony and greet
him effusively, crowding around him. He acknowledges their greetings with
equal effusiveness - still assuming that Cleopatra is among them. [With
Caesar dead, Antony, for all intents and purposes, is next in line to take
his place. It is extremely important to Antony that everyone see, and know,
that Cleopatra is coming to HIM, that she is honoring HIS "summons" to
her. It is critical to him (and his ego) that she come to him - as she
came traveling to Caesar in Rome. Cleopatra has the feeling Antony is more interested in
"dark women with white teeth", than in pursuing the dream of world dominance
she shared with Caesar. Until Antony proves his ambition is equal to hers,
she will not accept him as anything but second to Caesar - a rank not deserving
of having a Queen honor his "summons". As her subtle way of reminding him
of this, she deliberately wears the necklace of coins bearing Caesar's
likeness in his presence. This power play between to two, with Cleopatra
winning, gives their words of greeting quite a different context from what
is left for us to gather in the edited scene from the film. Especially
Cleopatra's first words to Antony. Unfortunately, the set up for the joke
has been deleted. This greatly weakens the punch line. It would be of great
interest to know how many people, after reading this and learning of the "set
up", now view this sequence with a great degree of underplayed humor.]
Then, Egyptian trumpeteers let fly with the
loudest and most elaborate fanfare of all! This time, Cleopatra really
appears. She enters. The crowd deserts Antony and rushes to the companionway
to greet her. Antony, left standing alone, seethes. Cleopatra comes to
greet Antony, saying dryly, "Mark Antony - how prompt you are!" And, "I
had hoped I would be here to welcome you as you came on board." The scene
continues as Cleopatra and Antony talk about the three years since their
last meeting:
ANTONY
I
remember - that night - in
Rome
saying it could still come true...
CLEOPATRA
You
said so much that night -
to
so many.
Antony
drinks. Surrounded by chomping, greasy, greedy
guests, Sosigenes and Rufio are together. Sosigenes eats only raw vegetables,
which he scrubs or peels carefully. Rufio doesn't eat at all. He drinks
gloomily...
RUFIO
(morosely)
Bringing
along boat-loads of
wheat
and oil for the common
folk.
She learned that from
Caesar...
SOSIGENES
True.
But you have all come to
her
- on Egyptian soil. Nobody
taught
her that.
(he
bites loudly
into
a carrot)
Slaves,
carrying a spitted lamb, pause by him, but they are waved off. They continue
on to a fat potentate who, full of wine, has become amorous towards Eiras. He
pulls her from
her ottoman onto his own. Terrified, she squirms helplessly on his knee as the
nuzzles her.
Apollodorus,
standing behind Cleopatra, bends so that Cleopatra may whisper to him.
He nods and goes toward the fat potentate molesting Eiras. As he approaches,
seemingly by accident, he kicks the ottoman out from under the potentate.
As he hits the deck, Apollodorus helps Eiras up and watches her scamper
off. He then bows in deep apology to the potentate. Antony, watching, lifts
his wine in appreciation...
ANTONY
Well
done. Brother to the King of
Cappadocia.
Ill-mannered. Should
have
waited until after dinner -
when
the sweets are passed...
CLEOPATRA
Even
then - and even for the brothers
of
kings - some dishes are out of
season.
The scene
continues from here with Antony suggesting he get rid of all the guests.
Cleopatra tells him she's arranged an entertainment, "...in the Greek fashion
- to welcome the god Bacchus". He continues, saying that if he left, the
others would have to leave, too. He could return in an hour and they could
talk, "...until we had nothing more to say." Cleopatra tells him she is
setting sail for Alexandria in the morning....
ANTONY
Then
you've come all this way - for
just
this one night. All this way -
to
make a fool of me...
CLEOPATRA
(sudden
sharpness)
Make
a fool of you? Before whom?
These
fools - ?
ANTONY
Princes,
kings - rulers who respect
the
name and authority of Rome!
A glassy-eyed
guest rises suddenly. He raises one hand with a goblet, the other holding
a leg of lamb.
GUEST
Hail,
Cleopatra!
Cleopatra
lifts her goblet in response...
CLEOPATRA
Of
anyone who will feed them! A
pack
of greedy swine content to
eat
themselves into captivity!
Are
these the conquests by which
you
wish to be remembered? Is
this
to be the limit of your world, Antony?
ANTONY
Then
why have you come?
CLEOPATRA
Perhaps
you'd feel less a fool if
you
stayed the night with me - is
that
it?
The
scene continues as the entertainment begins. Dancing girls encircle an
intoxicated Antony, enticing and teasing him. Then, on the entertainment
floor, he notices 'Cleopatra' seated beside the god Bacchus. He makes a
beeline toward her, but the dancing girls spin him, distracting him from
her. He breaks loose from them, shoves Bacchus out of the way, and takes
his place beside 'Cleopatra'. He kisses her in front of everyone. Then
he realizes the real Cleopatra is gone and leaves to find her. Below deck,
he finds Cleopatra in bed. The scene continues and reveals Antony's constant
feeling of being second-best to Caesar in every way. It is no longer a
matter of using Caesar to tease and lure Antony. For the first time, Cleopatra
sees an agonized and tortured man. Painfully laying bare - for them both
to see - the unique symbol Cleopatra has become of all that Caesar had
been, and all that Antony fears he can never become. He confesses that
thoughts of her have filled his life and he wants to be free from them
- and her. "But, I will never be free from you." They kiss, and the scene
dissolves to the next morning. Cleopatra and Antony lie together. For the
first time in each of their lives, they have become lovers in the true
sense. For Antony, he fell in love with Cleopatra, "... from the first
instant I saw you - entering Rome - on that monstrous stone beast...".
For Cleopatra, since she was twelve, and he was a young cavalry officer
stationed at the palace in Alexandria. She ends the scene with, "We'll
make this our beginning. Beginning with this night, you must never envy
Caesar - or anyone - anything again." The scene dissolves to the Roman
Senate. Octavian is speaking:
OCTAVIAN
-
and so it seems that the heart
of
our Empire to the East now
beats
in Alexandria. Are we
to
find this alarming?
Loud
cries of, "No!' from the left (Antony's adherents), and "Yes!" from the
right, (Octavian's).
OCTAVIAN
(smiles)
For
once I find myself in agreement
with
our noble colleagues on the
left
- Antony's loyal friends,
faithful
to the last...
A
SENATOR
(of
the left)
Together
with the people of
Rome
- of all Italy!
AGRIPPA
(to
his feet)
Rome!
Italy! Nothing now matters
to
Antony but his Egyptian trollop!
Again,
a storm of shouting...
OCTAVIAN
Hear
him out -
(the
noise abates)
Agrippa,
after all, has had some
knowledge,
at first hand, of
Cleopatra's
- way - with Roman
generals...
From the
left...
GERMANICUS
As
I recall it, Agrippa, you
acquired
that knowledge - about
the
time Caesar sent you crawling
back
to Rome with your tail
between
your legs...
Approving
laughter from those about him.
AGRIPPA
(angrily)
I
would crawl happily to Rome
rather
than remain panting
after
this cat in perpetual
season!
Cheers
from the right. Octavian quiets them...
OCTAVIAN
Agrippa,
you grow too angry - too
soon.
What has Antony done - that
should
upset us? Left the
business
of Rome unfinished in
Tarsus
- neglected the rebellion
in
Palmyra - ignored the complaints
of
the Jews against Herod - paid
no
heed to the Parthians already
in
Mesopotamia, preparing to
march
upon Syria - forgot Rome
and
his duty to Rome - to hurry
into
Egypt after a discarded
concubine
of Julius Caesar?
Again,
mingled shouts of approval and disapproval.
Octavian moves about, as he waits for them to subside.
OCTAVIAN
After
all, this is nothing new.
For
so many years, Antony has
fed
upon the crumbs that fell
from
Julius Caesar's table...
The scene
continues with Octavian pointing out how much time and thought Antony has
given to Cleopatra and Egypt, and how little to Rome. Germanicus, defending
Antony, is asked by Octavian to, "...stay not too long in Rome." The scene
dissolves to the exterior of the palace in
Alexandria. Beside the water, near the colonnade, Cleopatra watches as
Antony fights a mock duel with Caesarion.
Caesarion
uses a wooden sword and shield, as does Antony. The duel, though play,
is fought seriously. Antony is instructing the boy. Caesarion attacks.
Antony deftly parries his thrusts:
ANTONY
Draw
me in! - feint! - your wrist,
keep
your wrist stiff - your arm,
your
wrist, the sword, all one -
and
your shield up! Keep your
shield
up!
In
the course of the battle, Antony has retreated until he stands before Cleopatra
- his back to her. Swiftly, Cleopatra tickles Antony.
He
drops his shield and Caesarion "strikes home". Antony lets his sword drop
and falls. Caesarion jumps astride him, his sword at Antony's throat. Proudly,
he looks over at his mother...
CLEOPATRA
Always
keep your shield up - and
always
have a friend at your enemy's
back
- to tickle him...
She
gestures sternly: "Thumbs down". Caesarion promptly stabs at Antony's heart.
Antony howls with pain and simulates terrible death throes. Caesarion,
alarmed, drops his sword and throws himself on Antony...
CAESARION
Don't
die! Please don't die - !
Antony
laughs, rolls Caesarion over and roughhouses him. Cleopatra, enjoying it,
makes the mistake of getting too close. Antony pulls her down and tickles
her in revenge. All three are in a happy tangle.
They
continue their horseplay in the background as Sosigenes and Ramos come
in...
RAMOS
Lepidus
is dead. The Senate has
given
his territories and powers
to
Octavian. He means to have
it
all...
SOSIGENES
And
he will. If he can keep
Antony
away from Rome. What more - ?
RAMOS
Too
much. Germanicus will tell you
himself,
when he's rested...
SOSIGENES
It's
Cleopatra who must be told -
if
she will listen...
RAMOS
But
surely - after Germanicus has
come
all this way - she must know
how
important -
SOSIGENES
(breaks
in)
Everything
that was once most
important
to our Queen, Ramos -
has
now become least important...
In
the background, Cleopatra, Antony and Caesarion stroll off together...
RAMOS
And
if Octavian should take it all -
there
will be nothing left for
Caesarion.
Isn't she aware of that?
SOSIGENES
She
used to be. She used to be
very
aware of that. But then -
how
can I put it? - she
miscalculated...
He
starts to walk, Ramos beside him, in the opposite direction from Cleopatra...
RAMOS
I
don't understand...
SOSIGENES
(smiles)
It
can happen to generals, philosophers,
slaves
- even queens - and we blame
or
praise the gods. But whose fault
is
it when, quite unexpectedly, a
Goddess
falls hopelessly in love...?
[This
must have been one of the most painful cuts Mankiewicz had to make. For
the only time in the entire film, we would have seen Cleopatra blissfully
happy, playful, at peace, and enjoying being a mother and "wife". She is
free from the weight of the world, duties, responsibilities, and political
ambitions. And, for the viewer, our greatest opportunity to see the "other"
side of Cleopatra. Again, the character contrast has been removed.]
They
continue to walk out of the scene. In the background we still see the distant
figures of Cleopatra, Antony and Caesarion. The scene dissolves to
the throne room. Cleopatra is on the throne
continue